 rockprinsessa
04.11.2003 11:39:43 | |
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Tässä taas tällänen biisi..arvostelkaa, ja kertokaa virheet;) joita varmast ion, olen huono englannin kielessä.
I was doin' alright
Sharing my life with you
But it all went wrong
I didn't know what else I could do
I did somethin' bad
Now I have to pay the price
That price is death
For I'm driven to take my own life
I want to hide away
On this silent lonely night
I want to hide away
Cause there's somethin' that aint right
I've got blood on my hands
I've got scars in my mind
Hide away
Hide away
You treated me wrong
I was so blind not to see
What you were doing
I couldn't set you free
What else was there to do
I'm not a one to complain
I was in love with you
But my heart's been in so much pain
I want to hide away
On this silent lonely night
I want to hide away
Cause there's somethin' that aint right
I've got blood on my hands
I've got scars in my mind
Hide away
Hide away
Hide away
Hide away
I should have listened when the wise one said
If you fall in love - consider yourself dead
Is this a dream, I hope it's not true
I want to wake up in the morning with you
I want to hide away
On this silent lonely night
I want to hide away
Cause there's somethin' that aint right
I've got blood on my hands
I've got scars in my mind
Hide away
Hide away
Hide away
Hide away " I see through the darkness
My way back home
The journey seems endless
But I'll carry on
" |
Danny s
04.11.2003 21:04:37 | |
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joo..hemmetti että voi tulla koko ajan mieleen You've got to hide your love away, vaikka sanat on ihan eri..prkl mielleyhtymät |
 elina_kerttu
04.11.2003 23:05:14 | |
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Bongasin vain yhden mahdollisen virheen:
I'm not a one to complain
"The one" kuulostaisi jotenkin luontevammalta.. |
elina_kerttu
04.11.2003 23:06:25 | |
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Mutta siis muuten kyllä tosi jees..
Varsinkin vika säkeistö on sellainen tehokas. Hyvä lopetus. |
rockprinsessa
05.11.2003 08:40:12 | |
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kiitoksia arvosteluista... " I see through the darkness
My way back home
The journey seems endless
But I'll carry on
" |
 valje
11.11.2003 21:47:56 | |
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Osa joka alkaa: I should have listened.... jne. on musta tosi hyvä, muuten jää vähän pinnalliseksi, mutta ei missään nimessä huono. *dancing in the graves* |
rockprinsessa
12.11.2003 10:53:47 | |
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Kiitoksia... " I see through the darkness
My way back home
The journey seems endless
But I'll carry on
" |
butterfly
16.11.2003 17:33:58 | |
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Hyvät sanat =) |
Hideaway - sehän on se vanha bluesinstrumentaali.
Aiheutui kummallisia mielleyhtymiä. |
miän vain