rockprinsessa 04.11.2003 11:39:43 | |
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Tässä taas tällänen biisi..arvostelkaa, ja kertokaa virheet;) joita varmast ion, olen huono englannin kielessä. I was doin' alright Sharing my life with you But it all went wrong I didn't know what else I could do I did somethin' bad Now I have to pay the price That price is death For I'm driven to take my own life I want to hide away On this silent lonely night I want to hide away Cause there's somethin' that aint right I've got blood on my hands I've got scars in my mind Hide away Hide away You treated me wrong I was so blind not to see What you were doing I couldn't set you free What else was there to do I'm not a one to complain I was in love with you But my heart's been in so much pain I want to hide away On this silent lonely night I want to hide away Cause there's somethin' that aint right I've got blood on my hands I've got scars in my mind Hide away Hide away Hide away Hide away I should have listened when the wise one said If you fall in love - consider yourself dead Is this a dream, I hope it's not true I want to wake up in the morning with you I want to hide away On this silent lonely night I want to hide away Cause there's somethin' that aint right I've got blood on my hands I've got scars in my mind Hide away Hide away Hide away Hide away " I see through the darkness
My way back home
The journey seems endless
But I'll carry on
" |
Danny s 04.11.2003 21:04:37 | |
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joo..hemmetti että voi tulla koko ajan mieleen You've got to hide your love away, vaikka sanat on ihan eri..prkl mielleyhtymät |
Bongasin vain yhden mahdollisen virheen: I'm not a one to complain "The one" kuulostaisi jotenkin luontevammalta.. |
elina_kerttu 04.11.2003 23:06:25 | |
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Mutta siis muuten kyllä tosi jees.. Varsinkin vika säkeistö on sellainen tehokas. Hyvä lopetus. |
rockprinsessa 05.11.2003 08:40:12 | |
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kiitoksia arvosteluista... " I see through the darkness
My way back home
The journey seems endless
But I'll carry on
" |
valje 11.11.2003 21:47:56 | |
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Osa joka alkaa: I should have listened.... jne. on musta tosi hyvä, muuten jää vähän pinnalliseksi, mutta ei missään nimessä huono. *dancing in the graves* |
rockprinsessa 12.11.2003 10:53:47 | |
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Kiitoksia... " I see through the darkness
My way back home
The journey seems endless
But I'll carry on
" |
butterfly 16.11.2003 17:33:58 | |
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Hyvät sanat =) |
miän vain 17.11.2003 14:52:37 | |
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Hideaway - sehän on se vanha bluesinstrumentaali. Aiheutui kummallisia mielleyhtymiä. |