Aihe: Sinister Creation - Inhuman
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eLaxy
01.08.2005 17:11:19
I´m looking through a mirror.
What can I see?
A tired man with hollow eyes.
Looking to his soul.
I´m searching my mind.
What do I feel?
Burning desire to kill.
Is this just a reflection of my past?
 
Desires… I´m refusing.
Reflections… I´m confused.
Insanity… breathing down my neck.
Inhumanity breaking out.
 
(Kertsi)
I´m reborned the way I ment to be.
I buried the weaknesses in me.
Now I´m eternal, lifelong desease.
I was born to be inhuman.
 
Now I banish my soul away.
Away from my mortal body.
Now I´m embodiment of immortality.
I was born to be inhuman
(Kertsi)
 
I´m looking through a mirror.
What can I see?
Just a shadow from my past.
No gift of immortality.
I´m searching my mind.
What do I feel?
Burning desire to kill.
Only now it´s real and will be satisfied.
 
Desires… I´m ready.
Reflections… I´m immune.
Insanity… has taken control.
Inhumanity has breaked out.
 
(Kertsi)
I´m reborned the way I ment to be.
I buried the weaknesses in me.
Now I´m eternal, lifelong desease.
I was born to be inhuman.
 
Now I banish my soul away.
Away from my mortal body.
Now I´m embodiment of immortality.
I was born to be inhuman
(Kertsi)
eLaxy
02.08.2005 13:52:32
kiitoksia vain kommentista.. itseasiassa hainkin vähän joltain asiaa enemmän osaavalta korjailua kielioppiin (joka ei ole vahvin puoleni) :)
damnman
03.08.2005 22:47:22
Lisäksi korjattakoon, että verbi "mean" taipuu: mean - meant - meant. Ja "disease" (ei "desease"). Mutta niin, kelpo sanoitus.
"I'm not afraid of anything - except world peace." (Sledge Hammer)
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