Aihe: Toistaiseksi nimeämätön lyriikkapohja 1 | |
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![]() 29.12.2009 04:39:28 (muokattu 29.12.2009 04:44:06) | |
Rakenteellisesti tästä löytyy muutama säkeistö, siirtymä kertsiin, selkeä kertsi, väliosa ja jonkinlainen lopetus. Saattaa olla joitakin kirjoitusvirheitä, koska en vielä tässä kohdassa ole niitä kovin tarkasti pyrkinyt kitkemään. Kertsin kolmannen rivin "me" on tarkoitus lausua sillain vähän epämääräisesti kuulostaen "meij", jos joku ihmetteli, että miksi muut rivit kertsissä rimaavat, mutta se ei. "It must have been quite of a shock to find your girl on top of the devil's cock" You said to me in the darkest corner of the pub Dunno how, but that made me feel like wanted dead or alive, I didn't really care something I passionately wanted to share "Taste this bitterwine.. they gave it for free Cheapest one for me.. but it does the trick" I said and watched how you slurped until the bottle was empty "Yeah, I always swallow until the last drop falls" Dunno if you are a whore but the idea makes me want you even more.. Tell me we both matter don't we? You and me.. DNA, I would love to share some DNA Would you be mine for this one night? I can pay your drinks if you lay down with me Let the beggings come true tonight DNA, can you give me some DNA Show me there's a life after the light If I have a change show me the way Could I be your barkeeper tonight? She's quoting those phrases from the Big Book I would just want another sexy look She tells me all about god and heaven But how can I get into the next level? I've had enough from this lesson but I truely can feel the connection.. ..Tell me we both matter don't we? You and me.. DNA, I would love to share some DNA Would you be mine for this one night? I can pay your drinks if you lay down with me Let the beggings come true tonight DNA, can you give me some DNA Show me there's a life after the light If I have a change show me the way Could I be your barkeeper tonight? I don't judge, I'm here for the fudge If you are a whore, I want nothing more I don't hate, I'm here to open the gate If you are a slut, I'm still here for the fudge I'm not looking for a friend I'm here to play the fiend Two broken souls coming together Let's make the world a little better DNA, I would love to share some DNA Would you be mine for this one night? I can pay your drinks if you lay down with me Let the beggings come true tonight DNA, can you give me some DNA Show me there's a life after the light If I have a change show me the way I want my love machine tonight! Morning light and sickness within the shattered memory in my head So, this is it.. when you wake up from the enemy's bed..? And surely we'll have such good time | |
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