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Ive been thinkin of
our memories,
everythin what we had done
together
everyday and alweys.
 
But then you just
breaked me down
and runaway
with my heart
and left me to bleed.
 
Is this the end?
Am I now dyin
away?
Runaway,
but give my heart back
so I dont have to die
in your hands.
 
If you want to love me
then dont refrain.
Maybe you could heal
my broken heart
agin.
 
Dont you know
I still love you?
Now Im just tryin
to kill the pain,
and survive.
 
Is this the end?
What Ive got to do
than you could love me
again?
What Ive have to do
to get my heart
back?
 
I know you can still love me.
I know that you cant live without me.
Just take my hand
and dont blame me
if you die.
 
Is this the end?
Darlin tell me.
So I know
are you savin me
from the cold rain.
Just tell me
that you still love me.
 
Belive me,
we can still find our way.
Only you can save me
for your own bullet.
Please, come and save me!
 
Is this the end?
That you dont want to give
my heart back.
That you just want to
see me dyin.
Come and brake me down, just kill me.
Ill rather die than live
without you.