Tällaisen tempaisin ja tein. Tarkoitus olisi saattaa se vielää laulettavaan ja soitettavaan muotoon eli biisiksi. Kritiikki suotavaa.
Pt.1: Psychedelic sunrise
Rays of a morning, a new day dawning
No resolution in it
Clouds flaming red, I'm holding my breath
Sea turns to crimson pit
I gazed at the spiral, a circle of fire
Death of the night dies
Birth of a new life, yet I'm still blind
Psychedelic sunrise
I dance to my
Psychedelic sunrise
I dance to my
Psychedelic sunrise
Pt.2: Passing days
Sun travelling high
It provides me life
at last I see clear
Daylight has shown
Contrast to unknown
Shadows yet seem real
Day keeps passing by
Why must I die,
I try but why cannot relate
Still never losing my fate
I have
discovered the skies
yet I don't
know what now lies
within
the shadows of day
Never choosing their way
passing by
Passing days
Determined by past
Only standing for vast
future
Pt.3: Why the sun sets?
Circling trails of now gone sun
Burned in the eyes of once-a-child
He knows why sun rose
Now asks why it goes
Riddling night
Shadows grow long
Reaching for light
But it is long gone
Uncertain feeling
anxiety, terror, dread
Before he falls dead,
he finally sees
the sun must set
Pt.4: Psychedelic sunrise
Rise at the morning, again day dawning
I'm not afraid of it
Now that I see you, now I know you
Dive into crimson pit
Always exsisting, always keeps changing
The shadows you create
Now undestaning, I see the meaning
Yes, now I can relate
I stare at my
Psychedelic sunrise |
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