Aihe: Cloud of forbidden dreams
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rockprinsessa
27.09.2003 14:20:10
Dawn came upon me
Lifted me up to the sky
Carried me elsewhere
Dispersed my feelings and pain
To leave it all behind
I sucked in the happiness
Grew wings and flew away
No more bleeding in my wounded soul

Yet I wonder if it's real
Can every part of everything be right
Or am I floating in a cloud of dreams
Sentenced to nocturnal darkness
Sentenced by the light of day
I doubt in its reality

Waves crushed around me
Dissolved gravity in the sea
My mind wandered elsewhere
Dispersed my pain and misery
To leave it all behind
I melted into the sandy shore
Divine bliss made me dream away
No more pain in my bleeding core

Yet I wonder if it's real
Can every part of everything be right
Or am I floating in a cloud of dreams
Sentenced to nocturnal darkness
Sentenced by the light of day
I doubt in its reality

Flickering candleshine, my final words of weakness
I inject that bliss into my veins
To replace the emptiness you left inside of me
When you promised me the stars in the sky
And forgot that we're still stuck to the ground
Where there is no other life to live

Pyromaniac lust
Shivered all over me
To let me awake elsewhere
Dispersed emptiness and fear
To leave it all behind
I drowned in the warmth of lust
Caught the flame, enjoyed the heat
No more frost bites in my rotten soul

Yet I wonder if it's real
Can every part of everything be right
Or am I floating in a cloud of dreams
Sentenced to nocturnal darkness
Sentenced by the light of day
I doubt in its reality

Every step I take into this forbidden happiness
I want to inhale this beauty once again
I want to melt into the blinding light just once more
Yet my skin shivers, and life drifts away
So scared of getting caught forever in this cloud of dreams
Never thought I'd be losing grip to life


 
Tälläset sanat tein joskus, aika kauan sitten. Toivon palautetta. ja jos virheitä(varmasti on, olen huono englannissa)kertokaa!
"You are my heaven tonight..."
Horror of Night
28.09.2003 14:21:21
Ihan hyvät. Myö ihte teen ihan paska sanotuksia.
Himpi
02.10.2003 23:48:06
Englannin oikeakielisyyttä en osaa arvioida enkä muutakaan tekniikkaa, mutta muuten sanoituksesi upposi minuun ihan kybällä. Tosi kaunista, tosi kaunista.
rockprinsessa
09.10.2003 18:37:13
kiitokset arvosteluistanne:)
"You are my heaven tonight..."
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