Inspiraatio iski jälleen maailman pahuuttaa tuumaillessani, tässä jonkinmoinen tulos. Arvostelua, tack!
Panus
Alas, a new deity is born
Conceived from the union of freedom and man
godlike, ascended to our second last century
In the cradle of trade the newborn is placed
as the shades on the walls dance to its days
The two ranks of men which we all represent
step back at the noseful of this new scent
With this new religion rises the third installment
From the land of the free
the missionaries convert the land of old
the homeland of men and the morning sun’s shores
Initiating every man no matter what be his plan
All for the miracle of gold
If we wanted justice
all we could do was to change
our tradition to the culture they made
So we did, so did our neighbours
Now we are equal, without need of revival
Mindless crowds of pure profit
Clouded minds we are the knights
Of these kings that rule, though they never win
only bribing the forces they serve from within
Our faith is Trade!
Our pantheon Commerce!
Freedom and Change!
Let worship commence!
All earth inside the fist
that is but smog and the holy crusifix
on which lies nailed the red, the white
the dead and the alive, we, who once smiled
Now ambassadors of our kind, Panus, died |
täs on jotai tämmöstä lähes romanttista mystiikkaa, mä tykkään. Tähän täytyy tulla joku hämybiisi, mut kuitenki mahtipontisilla soinnuilla, taustalle! Vähän jäi vielä usvan peittoon joidenkin kohtien "syvempi" merkitys..
Muuten, tykkään helvetisti sun englannista! Kielellisesti aivan loistavia lauseita mm.
Initiating every man no matter what be his plan
all we could do was to change
Vähän joissain kohdissa ehkä tavumäärien kanssa kuulostaa siltä että saattaa tulla lieviä vaikeuksia mahduttaa, mut kaipa se onnistuu. Hienoa! "-Well Frank, you have a long hair, does that make you a woman?
-Well, you have a wooden leg, does that make you a table?!" www.TheZippyWackos.com
En muuten ole uskovainen, enkä ruotsalainen |
Definhel
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