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Tämmöistä biisiä reenaamme orkesterin kanssa lopulliseen muotoonsa. Miten sanat yksinänsä, tuntuvatko miltään? Ne syntyivät kyllä taas käsi kädessä melodian kanssa, että en tiedä.. Ja pitkätkin taitavat olla. Kommenttia kuitenkin, jos jaksatte lukea..?
 
Reflecting
 
Do you think the world should look like this on wintertime?
Can you see the red drops falling from the trees above us?
They say there's something living under the snow.
 
I see your eyes so empty and realize -no one's there
I could talk nonsense or be quiet, you wouldn't care
I guess I've been mistaken again
 
I'm sorry about this incident
but you look like someone I once knew
I thought you'd be her
I wish you'd seen her
Can you tell me where she's now?
 
She's not gone forever
if I look long enough I'll find her
 
How are you now? It's been so long since I've seen you
I remember everything, how about you?
It's so good to see you're still holding there
 
You turn away without a word, what did I say?
I've been wishing for so long to see you again someday
but I know now, I've been mistaken again
 
I'm sorry about this incident
but you look like someone I used to know
I thought you'd be him
I wish you'd seen him
Can you tell me where he's now
 
They can't be gone forever
I just need to look a little better
 
and I'll find them, I still do need them
even I pushed them away
I didn't mean to lose them for good
I just couldn't use them for anything
 
I will find you, I still do need you
even I pushed you away
I didn't mean to lose you for good
I just didn't have any use for you
 
I'm seeing someone again, I'm quite sure I know her from somewhere
Why isn't she moving, why isn't she breathing,
Why is she so cold?
 
I hit her on the face, she deserves it
-she's not living her life
She breaks in my arms, pieces of glass
A reflexion
 
Edit: puuttui yksi sana välistä. Hihii..

Loppuosa töksäyttää liian suoraan käsitellyn asian päin lukijan pläsiä. Viiden viimeisen säkeen sisältöä siis muuttaisin hiukkasen, ja antaisin lukijan/kuuntelijan päättää itse mistä kerrotaan.
 
Muuten tykkäsin.
 
EDIT: sanat. kaikki sanoin Minä sekavasti

Juu.. Sen viimesen säkeistön melodia onkin vähän synkempi kuin muissa. Samalla kun totuus paljastuu, muuttuu tunnelma. Mutta tämä on juuri sitä melodian ja sanojen yhteistä taivalta.:)
 
Kiitos kommentista. Lisää..?