Kirjoitin sanoitukset yhteen biisiin, ja nyt kaipaisin niihin mielipiteitä. Sanat on siis jaettu mies- ja naisvokalistille. Suurimman osan ajasta ne vain lausutaan, mutta tietyissä merkityissä kohdissa on tarkoitus laulaa. Onko liian kliseiset, liian oudot, tai ihan vaan huonot? Vai toimivatko ihan hyvin?
* Male vocalist*
It was a long day
A long day of running away
Away from the world
Away from everything
I remember your smile
Melting the snow around us
Sun was shining, birds were flying
Your presence, so serene
But soon would the moon be crying
For the moon knew what was to come
For that is all we are
* Female vocalist*
I was so happy
Happy to be with you
For you were the sunshine of my life
Blinding me day and night
I thought we could stay together
Together ever after, till the end of days
Till the end of the universe
Till the world would collapse
*In unison*
Little did we know
And even less do we now
But one things for sure
My love for you is neverending
*in unison, singing*
I... I will always love you
Will never ever let you go
But we are nothing but stardust
Nothing but stardust
*Female vocalist*
My life was flashing before my eyes
All the memories, good and bad
The memories of you, of us
And I realized I cannot let you go
*Male vocalist singing*
I... I will always love you
Till the very end of times
*Female vocalist singing*
We are nothing but stardust
Its time for us to go
*In unison*
We are stardust... stardust...
Living forevermore... forevermore...
We will never die never die...
But we will always remain separated. |
"I will always love you" -kohdasta heti kertsin alussa tulee mieleen se Whitney Houstonin vai kenen biisi onkaan. Ja muuten, nojoo, onhan noissa aika monta kliseistä ilmaisua, mutta ei se tarkoita etteikö ne käytännössä voisi toimiakin oikean sävellyksen kanssa. |
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