Aihe: Uusversio Beauty and The Beastistä
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Synnyttäjä
21.08.2004 00:29:56
 
 
Eli tässä olis meikäläisen ensikontribuutio MNettin.. Tässä on tällainen pieni satu, johon on jo valmiit musiikit, mutta kun alotin noitten lyriikoitten kirjottamisen, huomasin, että ajauduin 'loppusointuhelvettiin'. Eli musiikki ei anna hirveesti myötä työskennellä, mutta noita (semi)riimejä piti koittaa sitten ihan väkisin saada(joutui vähän kielioppisääntöjäkin taivuttamaan..). Kirjoittakaa kommentteja, parannusehdotuksia tai mitä vaan.. Niin ja jos keksitte hyvän nimen, niin antaa tulla..
 
Verse1:
From below, where he came/
Moonlight dancing on his tail/
Shadowed face ever so pale - ever so grey
Gazes up to the sky/
Feels the chill of the night/
Turns away to the light - very first time
All he wants, is to be free/
Away from his family/
Away from cruel daddy - now none too happy
But did he see, a thing so fair/
Now he sheds his first real tear/
Only wants to hold near - face so dear
 
Kertsi1:
Unbelievable, unforseen, innocent beauty/
Burns his heart/
But some things are better left unsaid/
And it's slowly tearing him apart
 
Verse2:
Heart of gold, though he holds/
Cannot make her all his own/
She sees a glimpse of his soul - and truth unfolds
So he stole her to the night/
Even though so hard he tried/
Couldn't see love justified - too terrified
And so now, his old habit/
Sees him now returning at it/
Consequenses so unhappy - and so tragic
Lifeless she lay, in his arms/
Torn apart, by this love/
Gone now to her God - for him too far
 
Kertsi2:
Unbelievable, unforseen, innocent beauty/
Burns his heart/
But certain actions speak louder than words/
And that's how she was torn apart
 
Bridge/Outro:
And as he slowly walks among men/
Only hatered feels for them/
With heavy heart cold and alone/
He starts his long and hard way home/
No angels guiding in light so dim/
Only monsters just like him
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