Pain of life and relief of death
Every morning I wake just to see darkness
I wash my hands and face,
*pah*, that won't wash my sins away
I brush my teeth but still
shit flows out from my mouth
I put my cloths on, hoping that
people wouldn’t laugh at me.
When taxi arrives I think:
could the dialogue with the driver be
"the climax of the day"
When I step out of the taxi
I will be overwhelmed by creatures
witch wear brown and listen Britney’s pears *and 50's ent*
Only I walk dressed in red
Brown is the colour of the day
Yesterday is history
and colour red is now old story
There must be better place than this
At least so I wish.
They say this is "reality"
but what if we're doom eternally?
Let's hope this isn't paradise.
Please open the Pandora’s Box
to purge this world.
Ou, how I admire the beauty of death
the last moment of man when he takes last breath
When his soul is released from this prison of flesh.
When his is journey is over and quest fulfilled.
All will be forgiven after pain of life *and relief of death*
Then he can finally rest and fly to the mighty ones up high
.
I don’t know should I hope or fear
that life is an illusion.
If life is an illusion is the reality better or worse
Do I really wanna know that?
I don’t want to live in reality
I would be much happier
in a dream where I’am god.
Ou, how I admire the beauty of death
the last moment of man when he takes last breath
When his soul is released from this prison of flesh.
When his is journey is over and quest fulfilled.
All will be forgiven after pain of life *and relief of death*
Then he can finally rest and fly to the mighty ones up high
to born in darkness, to die in darkness
to wake in darness, to sleep in darkness
No after workday and shower
I sit in front of this computer
writing song about my suffering
when people surely have their own problems.
But maybe I’am just avoiding computer games.
“get a life” they say but does these “sportiest”
have life then. I mean life is all game isn’t it?
ou, how I admire the beauty of game
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Selityksiä tähdille: * tai joku muu "älähdys"*
* you get your relief in death*
Ja vielä vaihtoehtoinen kertosäe:
All I wish is DEATH AND REBIRTH
Death here
and rebirth
somewhere else
DEATH AND REBIRTH
our salvation
or our last illusion?
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Itse en oikein tiedä pitäisinkö näitä lyriikoitani huonoina vai loistavina, ja se hämmentää.. Palautetta saa antaa niin positiivista kuin negatiivistakin
Palaute missä sanotaan vain hyvä/huono on toivottua ,mutta viellä enemmän haluan parannusehdotuksia ja perusteluja sille miksi se on mitä on ja mikä kohta siinä on mitä on... oon ihan sekasin... |
Hirveen paljon tekstiä... Ihan hupaisat. Ainakin mun silmään/'korvaan' englanninkielen käyttö tuntuu vähän kömpelöhköltä. Siis havaitsee lukiessaan ettei se kirjoittajan äidinkieli ole.
Kaippa noi vois jossain biisissä toimia. Itten makuun ei oo mitkään huiput, mut ei nyt ihan huonotkaan.
Tuossa on virhe:
but what if we're doom eternally?
doomed? Sanity is just the majority of lunatics
setting the standard. |
Nuntius Deum
Spiralmind
ganesha