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Kirjoittaja:HumongousFungus
Alue:Lyriikka
Aihe:Miten olisi hyvä lähteä tekemään englannin kielistä lyriikkaa?
Aika:21.02.2011 18:09   (muokattu 21.02.2011 18:10)
Tavallaan höpöhöpöjuttuja..
 
Kirjoitat mitä kirjoitat, sitten annat jonkun natiivin luettavaksi. Hiljalleen alat muodostaa omaa tyyliäsi joka tuskin poikkeaa heidän kirjoittamastaan. Positiivista siinä, että suomalainen kirjoitta englanniksi on, että ei ole kangistunut samoihin kaavoihin kuin he jotka kirjoittavat sitä äidinkielenään. Pystyy vähän funtsimaan sen laatikon ulkoreunoiltakin.
 
Aihe voi olla mitä vaan mutta se, miten sitä lähestyy ja miten sen ilmaisee on sitten se tärkeä asia. Kirjoita jostain mikä on sulle jotenkin tuttua..mutta tee kielestä rikasta vertauskuvien ja muiden hömpänpömppien kanssa.
 
Rap lyriikoissa ei välttämättä tarvitse katukieltä.. tässä esimerkki räp-lyriikoista jonka allekirjoittanut on tehnyt normaalilla , laiskalla, kouluenglannilla...ja tottakai sitten kehittänyt kielitaitoaan kirjoittaessa.
 
Mirage
 
You feed my desire with vague promises
And shady images of an ageless queen
My soul's on fire, blazing like Paris is
The city of joy and restless dreams
 
All I got from you was dark wreath from your hair
With scent of spring and morning dew
Scarlet face and depth of your stare
Amend my sins I'll fall in to
 
Butterflys are dancing in the shape of your figure
Watch them twist n' turn, Want to scape away with u
Summer Azures and Ulysses' combine to one breating creature
Last tip of your ear is finished, you become living picture
The Flawless contour, vacant yet delicate
Purest of pure, there can't be replicate
Birds are playing Vivaldi but I would dance without it
Your every breath is new melody, prance thru' boundries
There's a chance you found me, your eyes' glance surrounds me
There's no other that could see a man throughoutly
Fall colors, snowflakes, rainbows and bloom
They all honour the beauty of Angels and You
Then with featherlight steps you approach my body
All I can wish is: please heart dont stop pounding
Suddenly you start to diminish, slowly disappear
I say goodbye and moist the ground with a tear...
 
You feed my desire with vague promises
And Shady images of an ageless queen
My soul's on fire, blazing like Paris is
The city of joy and restless dreams
 
A new scene, unseen, seems to be real to me
You're bathing in sunlight, I lean to see
How you souse your feet in the sparkling river
I watch this perfect symbiosis and start to shiver
Your existance - it causes serenity and calmness
Tell me, has the horizon ever been so flawless?
You wave at me and so does the whole forest
Oaks and alders, birches maples and clovers
They're inviting me, so I dare to approach you
Soft wind caresses your body, I'm scared to broach you
Inch by inch I reach for you with trembling hands
I stop right before impact, matter's pending and
You lean towards my ear, whisper, soulmates never die
I hesitate to talk back, won't they ever, why?
You slowly open your mouth to give me reply
Then like light flashes you're gone and im griefing n' cryin
 
You feed my desire with vague promises
And shady images of an ageless queen
My soul's on fire, blazing like Paris is
The city of joy and restless dreams
 
Next time I saw you was in close past in the fall
I valued those moments but they only lasted so long
I don't lie when I say I'd gone past death and sworn
To be beside u through the laughter or scorn
And when you finally surrend to me, your entity,
descends to me.
The love of thousand centuries, we're ment to be,
amending me.
Our hips are closing, your lips controll me,
So this is for real? Mistress calling..
I rake your hair and sooth you softly
Then remember the past, I choose to stop it
Take a step back, feel abused and broken
I run far, far away until im exhausted and chockin'
Too tired to continue, I faint and start dreaming
Wake up gripping a dark hair in my hand...
What to believe in?
 
You feed my desire with vague promises
And shady images of an ageless queen
My soul's on fire, blazing like Paris is
The city of joy and restless dreams
 
All I got from you was dark wreath from your hair
With scent of spring and morning dew
Scarlet face and depth of your stare
Amend my sins I'll fall in to
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